Overall, I got a lot out of my peer review session. We went around and briefly discussed our papers, providing each other with important feedback for the revision process. A lot of the feedback I received was things that I agreed with, and things that my peers were saying were all things that I agreed with. Some of the feedback that I received was to break apart my paragraphs a little more, and address my subject by his last name. I also want to add more quotes from colleagues of my subject, as I don’t have many quotes from people besides Mourad.
