Overall, I was given a lot of very solid feedback which will benefit me as I start to workshop my piece. The most useful advice that I received was about the content of my article. I was told that a sociological study would fit into my article very well, and to look for something examining the connection between happiness and residency in a walkable city. I was also advised to focus the lede more, and give background information in a nut graf, which should go after the lede. Another helpful piece of advice that I received was to interview alumni of UNE to see if they feel the longingness for college that I describe in my article. This would add a whole new dimension in my article, and while I have not been successful yet, I hope to incorporate this kind of an interview into my revised article.
