My project strengths lie in the writing, as I did a very good job of being emotional in my work and tying it back into my major. My goal with expanding this project is to get into new ideas that the limits of the assignment did not let me explore. I feel that my weaknesses in this project are that I am quite vague, and I tend to repeat myself. When I wrote this essay, I had nothing else to say about the topic matter, but now that I have gone through most of a communications program, attention is my entire world. Each of these paragraphs could be a paper by themselves, and I intend to expand them to give myself more space to express what I was trying to do in this paper.
